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for Captured: The Sheik's Bride

by BelieveInMe

person storm
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story please keep it coming!
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re back!
person Gypsi
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smiling, A baby...a beautful baby is such a nice twist to this great story. I did wish the chapter was longer though. Now Khadeem is going to have to work even harder for her. Please update soon I love this story.
person lola
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Review soon!!!!
person RedBallonGirlCorner...
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person audrey
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! now you\'ve made me all ansy! PLEASE update ASAP! (sorry never good at what to say in reviews.. but i only answer to the stories i really really like ^_^).. neway.. the suspense is killing me!
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry to say your story lack of originality and a copy cat of another story I\'ve read with similar heading especially the first chapter.
person kk
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i find your story very offense to middle easterners and muslims of all kinds. this is a sick story and maybe you should learn a little about the topic youre writting on before u actually do.
person Gypsi
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you are continuing this story and I\'m also glad Kadeem is back. Now that she realized she loves him their relationship can grow even more.
person kc
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving it!!! more soon