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for Captured: The Sheik's Bride

by BelieveInMe

person Yukie
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm just sending in Hugs! It's a great story. Hope you have more coming up!
person Ana
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapters 1-11 and its a wonderful story. I love all the characters. Especially the old lady that's like Kahdeem's 2nd mom. You must update soon!
person Sonyasha
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story i cant wait to read more. please update soon.

Ja-Ne =^_^=
person Katie
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Evil! I thought this was an update. Evil tease! Update please.
person Katie
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You put at the end of the story that it was meerly a beginning. Can I assume then you will update more than every six months?
person La Belle
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update sooooooon! I love this story... so much drama! <3
person J
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
i am so beyond happy for a new chapter for this amazing story.

please for the love of all my sanity, don't let the next chapter update be months and months and months, etc.. away :D
person Ali
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know whether to kiss you or strange you!!!! "not the end, only the beginning." AHHHHHHH!!!! I just had resigned myself to think you had abondoned this (I was going to boot you from my sacred favorite link list) and now you come back...and I'm so happy...but then I want the waiting to be over. *Tear* please oh please don't take so long next time...I have to know the ending!!! LoL, it is stories like this that kill me.

P.S.-As a constructive criticism (a nitpick really, sorry) when they are in the Limo you put 'Callie' instead of 'Leanna'. But that's it, everything else was excellent.
person patricia
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am enjoying this story would like if you are going write more ?
person vegiegirl88@hotmail.com
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are u not going to finish it? just wondering because i kinda like it!!