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These first 3-4 chapters seem way 2 forced. Tho Leanna seems very upset she doesn't react like some1 in her situation really would. She did not try to run from kadeem directly, nor did she try to negotiate his taking her home or letting her go at all. There were no escape attempts at all mentioned b4 the wedding, & kadeem acts very cold hearted with his forcing all this on her with NO reassurances despite allegedly falling for her. Has she tried 2 get a fine 2 contact any1? Has she scouted for escape routes? None of this realistically adds up.also shame on kadeem forcing her 2 go thru ANOTHER exam after he himself confirmed she was a virgin. What was the point of that? There is no attempt to make Leanna feel attached 2 him at all other than physically.

Why do ALL the middle Easterners speak English???? The nobles I understand but it should not be so wide spread that the nurse speaks if, or the other servants either. But not only do every man woman & child speak English n this story, the only foreign words spoken are the "ancient vows" spoken at the wedding. Also the wedding itself is too American. There is simply too little effort to bring the sheik's culture into the sheik's own story!

excelente histori, espero que pronto alces nevos caoitulos de la misma, ana maria

Ohh juts stumbled over this gem =)
For once someone who didn't picture oriental pepople like cruel creatures without any regard for love. *claps hands*
Will it be continued? It's really a nice romance story and I am cruios what happens now where she finally accepted her feelings toward him.

your ride horses at the stables, not at a barn. Otherwise, great fic!

If this is merely the begining, where's the rest??? (come on, I'm begging you here.)

Please update! It's sooo romancing!

This story is pure rubbish and full of loopholes not to mention sickeningly sweet like Sweet Valley High. More for teenagers and trying to throw in some raunchy sex. Terribly written

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEE update soon! I've been checking for updates periodically every couple of months, And I was SOOO excited to see that you updated! I hope you'll do so again soon! It's an amazing story!:)

Hey, I found it again! Read this a while back but forgot the title...:P Anyway, awesome progress so far! Finally, Khadeem is explaining things to her and they can move on. More please! :)