rate_review Reviews

very good...

This wasn\'t a bad story though it read very jerky. It didn\'t feel as smooth and polished as it could be. Many of the discriptions stuttered along, and for the most part the sex scenes felt a little flat. Not say this is bad, it does have a purpose of being erotic which it does. It\'s just it could be a lot better white more detail and polish.

ok wow i really liked that. i really liked your story rest assured but i have a problem and noone to vent to so please forgive me. i have had sex with alot of guys and i am totally atracted to girls, but for me unless its actually real sex i can feel and taste and smell, it wont turn me on if it is just guy on gurl. I am wildly obsessed with m/m f/f and other odities if it is considered wrong it turns me on. Like incest i know it is wrong but dam its so hot and rape. i have been raped before and i have that thing where you connect with your assailnt i mean i said no i fought back i tried to stop it but all the while it turned me on i was so wet and stories about teachers and student s so any ways thnx for listening to me bitch i really needed to vent but that stuff is only what i like to read. my sex life is contained to male on female and female on female as long as no one is related

nice

that was kick and hot as hell

I grant thee shower of stars.

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I liked it. Reading this was \'A New Experience\' for me. I usually only read m/m. I would love a second chapter.

next chapter!!!

wow. Great story. I really enjoyed it.