rate_review Reviews

Bravo.

I beg for more. You should definitely post more of the fic - maybe rewrite it into really smutty smut fic and nothing more. Mwuahaha. Yes, well, I just wanna read more and see why the hate is there. That was brilliantly written and very... delicious. I loved it.

Wow, this was fantastic! I am so intrigued about the characters! What are they fighting about? There is so much passion yet hate as well. You said that this is a part ripped from a multi-chapter fic. Well please post that fic or at least continue their story because like I said I totally want to find out more about your characters and their story! Brillant chapter! Hope you continue this story!!

Dude, I don\'t know why you decided to scrap the rest of this story, but I would encourage you to try again because just this little bit of naughtiness is AWESOME. Well written, intriguing... I want more. I want to know why they hate each other so much. More, more, more!

so was it rape or what? good so far