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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is an incredible story. You\'re so vivid with your descriptions I felt I was living Reven\'s heatbreak. And of course there was hot, steamy sex. I\'ve always enjoyed your GW stories and thought I\'d give this one a try too. I\'m so glad I did. Keep up the good work.
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heartbreak. Ack, can\'t type!
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::applauds:: Nicely done! Relatively satisfying ending for a story that\'s not yet ended! :D Kudos to you and all the other writers involved with Reven\'s storyline, over the several threads of it. I think this is publishable quality.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The fourth chapter is just as good as the previous three. I don\'t know why more people aren\'t reading this. They don\'t know what they\'re missing. Looking forward to the rest. :)
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really very good. You\'ve got a nice way with description that\'s vivid without being ostentatious. But if you can wrap this up in only five chapters, a) you\'re one helluva plotter, and b) I\'ll be really disappointed, because I think I want it to last longer. Work for at least ten chapters. ;) Looking forward to the next chapter!