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by CatHound

person HolyManDan
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. interesting story.

Nice descriptions and a quite good plot as well. You said you needed ideas so here it is.


Emily tells Peter that she likes him and he says he likes her too. They talk, Paige comes in and says that Emily dreams about Peter. Emily denys it but she actually does. Peter is stunned and says he does too. (then you put in a sex sceen between Emily and Peter. Paige looks on and smiles.)