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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so are you leaving this story forever or just waiting to update when you have new ideas. whatever you decide i am with you 100% because i think this story was pretty good and i cant wait for more on this story or a new story!
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would say you might want to work a little harder to hide your sources. There\'s nothing wrong with taking on ideas you like, but you shouldn\'t be Monkey See Monkey Do. Right now this is quite obviously a cross between Mars and Sensual Phrase. Don\'t allow yourself to fall into mimicking others. Take hold of the things you like and truly make them your own. You\'ve got an advantage over many beginners, because you are already seeing how a story needs to be structured. Now work to make what is distinctly YOU come through in what you write.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
??????????????????????????? that\'s all i really have to say about that.....
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so lemme get this straight...she hasnt talked to him for like 2 years and then all of the sudden she is in love with him...blaa
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No no, I mentioned in the story that she isn\'t inlove with him.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter and can\'t wait to find out what\'s haunting him.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it....i just think it\'s happening all too soon....but it\'s REALLY good! keep writing i love it
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked how you said it was a \"bad boy changes good girl.\" instead of \"good girl changes bad boy\" that is a straight statement that means this will be different the typical bad bot teen romance stories. i like it so far.