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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this story seems pretty cool.
You should keep it up.
You should keep it up.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story :) I enjoyed it quite a bit.
Although, if you end up continuing with this, I would like to see how Trent and Viper recover from Chapter 3.
Although, if you end up continuing with this, I would like to see how Trent and Viper recover from Chapter 3.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I\'m really getting into the plot, and you\'re way of writing is very sophisticated and just so original. Anyways, I just love Vipor\'s character. Please continue on with this story. I jsut can\'t wait for the next chapter.
-snowyangel4685
-snowyangel4685
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a real good chatpter... just a little slow sexually
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooo more more update!!! LOL dis is a great story kip it up
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey - The story sounds great so far! I can\'t wait to see the developments. Please don\'t wait to long to update!:)
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Chapter three is... interesting.
Pleas update soon! ^_^
Pleas update soon! ^_^
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its good. update!!
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya have to keep going i wanna know what goes donw
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...omg you finally updated!! yes thank you thank you!! ive been waiting forever!! *squeals* i hope you get chapter 3 out SOON!!