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nice story but it hasn\'t been update in a while. when are you going to finish it? i am have been waiting since the summer for it.

i absoloutely love the story, it\'s very well written and for that i am very grateful (not many out there...keep up the good work plz) i can\'t wait to see what will happen. and i do agree with anon...i\'m more worried about raven... hope u plan on updating soon...cheers

Funny, I know it\'s Lain\'s mystery I\'m supposed to be riveted on, and I am, but somehow it\'s still Reven I\'m worried about. I have a terrible feeling he\'s going to end up even more screwed than ever before this is over. Poor baby. Oh well, it will go as it goes and I know you\'ll make me love it. ;) Keep dishing it out, I\'ll keep lapping it up.

I very much enjoyed Blood and Soot despite the completely depressing ending. You are very talented and your writing flows perfectly. It is the reason I decided to go ahead and read Soot Seraphim as well even though I was taking another chance that it will end sadly (I am a happy ending kinda person). But, when I got to the chap with the detailed sex scene with a 15 year old, I just couldn\'t continue. I can\'t get past the sex with a minor bit. I would have felt a lot better about it had Kalain been 17 instead of 15. I understand that things like that happen in real life and therefore in stories, but if it needs to be written, I feel it should be more a reference to something that happened instead of details (like you did in Blood & Soot - I don\'t recall this in Blood & Soot; Seems like Reven was older - Inoue waited on him to be older). You need to add MINOR as a story code in your summary so people won\'t be surprised when they get to that point.

Don\'t want this to discourage you from writing...like I said you have a wonderful talent and your stories that I\'ve read so far have been so incredible. But, I just have a real problem with detailed sexual scenes involving minors.

I\'m delighted to see you picking this up again! Still excellent!

Yay, more Reven! And two great chapters! :D Loved the art imagery (and its emotional impact) and the National Geographic style reference book.

\"It got me in trouble a few times, because I didn\'t hear things I needed to...\" I like how you just slipped that in - very subtle little hook in there...

I really hope you guys don\'t get discouraged from the lack of reviews (I get the feeling this section isn\'t a high profile area of the site!). I know this is sort of cross-reviewing, but I\'m just in love with the whole Reven/Inoue, et al, storylines, and really hope you don\'t abandon them. Terrific characters, excellent pacing and plotting, all superbly written. I keep checking back for new chapters, and am starting to worry... Please keep up the good work!