rate_review Reviews

whoa. i feel sorry for you. too bad. but not guys are like that.

review...review...review...hmmm...I can only say that I really like your writing style and hope that this depiction was not how You really spent Your first time. If it was, then I hope that you have since discoverd the enjoyment of sex with a partner. I did like this little depiction though, because it is rather realistic for most young women....sadly. I am a pure romantic at heart and try to write fireworks and orgasims into all of my sex scenes. This seems to irk some of the readers around here. *giggles*

WOW!!!!!!! An in answer to your question, yes please! I\'d really like to hear about your real first time. You write so well just another fic would be awesome so pleeease. PLus I\'m really interested to know aobut your real first time so...there you go. lol.

In response to your story, I found your writing style extremely witty and funny, but I also got the sadness and dissapointment come through as well. You\'re very talented. I wish I could write like you. I am nearly 18 and still a virgin which makes me feel like a loser, but I do intend to lose my virginity to someone I love, although I have taught my self to expect the disappointment. I know I would like it to be like these novels, but I understand it could be like eventually, just not at first. I\'m expecting it to be crap, and your fic is helping me to actually LESSON the disappointment, because I won\'t be expecting too much. So in short...your doing a GOOD thing by writing this honest fic. So all those flamers (not there are that many lol) YOU SUCK! Shes doing a good thing! GET IT!

Love Kess xxx a fan *looks adoringly up at you* lol I\'m such a freak

I love it. I wish I would have kbow what it was really like before I did it and i learned that age has nothing to do with expirence. I now regret it and thanks for telling the truth most people make it sound magical. It was terible he only last like 2 mins it was the worst expirence in my life

haha, that was good!! that reminds me of my first time. It only got better after that though.

I know how you feel. Granted my first time was only about five days ago, and I know the guy really, really well. It wasn\'t as good as I thought it would be either...but I mean it wasn\'t bad either. The position was not what I would have liked (we were on our sides, I would have preferred plain, ol\' missionary myself) and I did have some pleasure out of it.

Life kind of sucks, don\'t it? lol. Nice job. I really felt what you were going for. Good Job.

~CR

i lost my virginity on a picnic bench near a huge statue of a cow i know what you me

It\'s funny and sad at the same time. Some guys just don\'t know how to please.

Damn, you really said it there. There is no such thing as magic when it comes to sex.
I don\'t even know why people bother to search company from the bars half of their lives. It\'s really annoying.

Hello ^^ I read your story long ago and your a great writer! I haven\'t lost my virginity yet (even though I\'m 18, never had a real relationship or kiss etc. so yeah I\'m a loser :P) cause I\'m saving it for the right time and guy; but judging from your reviewers and fic it seems to be dissapointing for a girls first time. Which I think sucks, I\'m in the stage thinking its going to be sweet and memorable but most people are saying its gonna suck, this and that. Speaking of this, I need to ask my bestfriend what did she think of her first time with her bf and see what she says... also your fic just inspired me to write a fic of my own, but this one won\'t pop up until later because its gonna be based on my first time ^^ see the thing with me is, whenever I\'m told something negative or read something that says \"there\'s no such thing\" or \"its impossible\" and I think otherwise, I like to prove those people wrong. Like people tell me, I\'ll never make it in being an author cause I suck, blah, blah, blah well those people inspired me to prove them wrong cause I know I can do it because I\'m a strong willed, determined, strong believing person. But Anyway, ^^0 sorry for chatting your ear off, I loved your story it was well detailed and stuff but I\'m sorry about your first time, if my first time suck like that I\'d be dissapointed too. If my first time does suck though, then I will e-mail you and tell you that you were right but if not, I\'m gonna definitely post a fic based on my first here. Nameless isn\'t my name, I\'m just too lazy to sign in ^o^ keep up the good work!