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for Double Trouble

by bean1498

person Amber
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so very tempting! *swoon* We must have more! More more more more more! Please??
person holly
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dammnnnn! Hot and sexy.
person michelle
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo, that one was really good. i\'ve never heard of that kind of \"ball\" before; did those really happen or did you make it up? in any case, it was hot. i think, in this chapter, you could set the \"mood\" a little more with more mention of the people watching drake and quinn, to make it even more risque or something. although it would be hard ot see their expressions behind the masks! to make it more plotty you could add the reaction of the public when the less accepting upper class finds out about this relationship, which i\'m sure has occured to you. in any case, i\'ll definitely be checking for updates to this one and one of your other stories i started reading the other day, about Jason and Andy and Evan. and yes, this is definitely more \"erotic\" than romantic, i\'d say! ;)
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:Drools obsessively over this plot: Hmm, threesomes are my new favorite thing in thw whole world. Great graphic sexy scenes.
person Tabitha
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve got me drooling... Come on don\'t leave us with a cliffie like that! Be a nice author and feed your salivating public. =)
person cookie
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Cheers* Yes, I found this story again. Whoohoo! I had read this a while ago but could not remember the name of the fic. I\'m happy now...this story is amazingly sexy as hell.
person Pudding333
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I liked it! I always tend to find it hard to cram in sex, mood, tone, feeling, and so on, into just one chapter also, so don\'t feel bad. That\'s why my sex stories tend to be really long. ^^ Anyhow, I still really like your story here, so please keep on writing.
person NoOne
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon... I really wanna read more.
person Tirch
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m normally not one for m/m/f but this story is awesome. It\'s funny and definitely hot. Way to go.
person Tabitha
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quinn slid into Quinn\'s body? Lol how is that possible? LOLOLOLOLOLOL Sorry couldn\'t resist but it\'s a great chapter and I wish you luck with writing the next one. -) This masqurade (sp?) is as interesting as the rest of your writing then I\'ll definately enjoy it. =) Polyandry is quite fasinating.