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for Double Trouble

by bean1498

person Christina
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
seriously loving this story!! I read it years ago and only just recently found it again. I know its been years since its been updated and youre probably busy but please write more when you have the time? Amazing story and im anticipating another chapter! Keep up the great work! :D
person Jade
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good, but it would fit in better in the erotic section
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i know you havent up dated for like over 2 years but still i check it every couple months to see if youve updated :( cause it is such an awesome concept i cant get it out of my mind :( i no this is probably pointless but figured it couldnt hurt and ive been told i can be awesome help and a great listener lol
person Southern
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot hot hot hot hot...please please write more..i know its been forever since uve updated but PLEASE update
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... Are you going to update soon?

Tsukinani
person proud wetback
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! You must update this. I just read it (twice) and I\'m dying to read more.
person heksibal
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot story...just keep the threeway alive and well, please!!!
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m doing this in advance, I haven\'t read it yet. But I think I\'m REALLY going to like it. Stupid, huh? Oh well, I\'m going to go put out the garbage and then I\'m coming back to read this! Don\'t let me down/
person Shai
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I\'m the crazy reader from above, or at least assume right above since it was only an hour or so ago.



It was FINE, to your last A/N.




First, though gods know I don\'t suggest you go through the entire story correcting this little thing, but FDukes aren\'t called, Duke Quinn of Northbridge (was that it). Anyway, it\'s Duke Surname of Northbridge, slash Quinnn Surname... Hell, on the surname I\'m not even sure about that, I\'m just sure it\'s not their first names. I know this, or faintly remember, because I used to read victorian - or later, who knows - novels. I\'d suggest Stephanie Lauren by the way, if you want to research, though you did olkay to good here anyway. So, Stephanie Lauren, not skimpy on the details and while it takes a while to get \'there\' when you do, VERY FINE. Particularly On a Wild Dawn.

Okay. Anyways, please write more of this, please please please, and very nice story by the way. Gawd, I\'m just realizing how sexy it\'d be, watching two guys...



As it happens, you provided inspiration for me, I think, as I\'m righting a sorta similar story - sorta, I exaggerate - but it\'s called Bridge For Love, it\'s supposed to be very deep, though now it\'s a one chater sucky - not in the good way - yaoi.

Hell, can you STAND people who go on about their stories i reveiws?! Jeez. I\'m GOING now, this is ridiculously long, for me at least. Alright, GONE!
person rca
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update or else...*Shakes fist*