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for The Fallout

by SphinxFantasy

person Kohaku Frost
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story, nicely detailed, and it actually has plot. I\'m impressed. If you would like, I can beta, and I\'m an experienced copy editor. If at all possible, could you hurry with the next installment? Thanks.
person cass
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really hope you continue with this, it is truly a wonderful story so far and i look forward to the next chapter.