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for The Torture and the Beating

by OliviaQ

person Amber
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is very exciting considering its only the first chapter. Do tell when the other chapters will come (hopefully sooner than later).
person night
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very well written. interesting story...please do continue!
person drake220
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this!! theres an obvious amount of history and i love backstories that come to light! will you expound on how their relationship came to be?
person Ametank (not logged in)
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...kinky. I like that there seemed to be a purpose to the beating. PWPs loose me pretty quick. Can\'t wait for more!