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for The Love of a Slave

by KayeFierch

person Pudding333
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Poor girl! Poor Coran! I wonder what they\'ll do next... Excellent story! Please do continue.
person loopypants
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope it gets to the good stuff soon!
person Pudding333
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, this is getting to be a really good story. ^^ Please continue!
person Blue-chan
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is OUSTANDING! One is the best original pieces I have read on here. And her punching him at the very end of that chapter..... brillant. Please add more soon. I will be waiting!
person DarkMystic
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man...To find out you wernt the intended person he wanted. I dont know if I would be sad, because atleast she was good enough for him to take right? Anyways, its a great story, and I obviously like it alot, please write more, thanks. ^_^
person loopypants
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like. Very well written. Keep it up!