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for The Love of a Slave

by KayeFierch

schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It was so beautiful. I just couldnt believe how good it was that arielle's hated enemy would be her favorite lover. Great work. 5 stars to you!!!
person Pudding333
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing for so long. I\'m so lazy...
Whoa, I\'m sure that confession is going to get one hell of a response... or maybe none at all as Coran faints? In any case, excellent writing, and I do look forward to how he reacts to this news.
person Loopypants
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was cute, she thought she was making love to him aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww.
person ^^
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hm.....
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooaahhh! This is very different from what I usually read but... I read it and I gave it a chance and I liked it!! <333
You have my praise!!! <333333333333333333333333!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The Ashido seal of approval! >O!
person Anon
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...
person Pudding333
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still such a sweet story! Feel really sorry for her, though... Wonder what\'ll happen, specifically what Coran\'s planning to do to fix - or not fix - the whole situation. Excellent story, however - no glaring errors like some stories tend to have on this \'site - so please keep on goin\'.
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
better much better sorry of the last time i lost my temper but it going
person loopypants
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how sad. I feel like crying. He wasn\'t her first. Bummer!
person Anon
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hated that she got rape that could have going diffantly but I\'ll keep reading hope fully you\'ll give a happy end maybe you no idea what it\'s like to be rade you sould look it up.