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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story - realistic and funny dialogue, well paced (at least in my opinion), diverse interesting characters. My only complaint is the randomness with which you update. It\'s hard to keep interest in a story when you only get to read one chapter every two months. Otherwise, I like it very much.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the update! I missed this story!
This is one of those stories that has you going \"Aww\" and \"oh my god, you like each other just get over it!\" all at the same time. I like the way you give both perspectives -it\'s nice knowing what they each think about the other\'s actions. Cute and sweet. Hope to see more soon!
This is one of those stories that has you going \"Aww\" and \"oh my god, you like each other just get over it!\" all at the same time. I like the way you give both perspectives -it\'s nice knowing what they each think about the other\'s actions. Cute and sweet. Hope to see more soon!
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it might just be me, but this whole switching from one POV to the other is getting a little confusing for me. it was very well written, but this chapter was almost too confusing because of the introduction of all these new people and the constantly changing POV. you might try keeping it all third person omnicient, or try changing the POV every chapter, but not several times in a chapter, it just gets confusing. waiting for the next chapter!!
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s really good....you little tease
can they ATLEAST kiss next chapter?
can they ATLEAST kiss next chapter?
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! more! i like it.
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you do continue this. I am interested to see what happens between Aria and Caine. Keep up the hardwork and I will be patient. :)
~Moon-Daisuke
~Moon-Daisuke
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story, look forward to it\'s updates. Take you time, we\'ll wait for however long it takes for the next one.
PS: hope Caine and Aria finally get to kiss soon
PS: hope Caine and Aria finally get to kiss soon
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April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I can\'t wait to see where it goes. The characters are brill, ur style of writing is really good and I can\'t wait for more of this story.
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey im loving your story so far and i can\'t wait til you update. Keep writing.
Hannahxoxxoxo
Hannahxoxxoxo