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for A Midnight Dream

by dreamdancer

person :~)
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very very nice. *leaves you cookies*
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty hot. But there are just a few spelling errors. In paragraphs 4 and 6 you need to replace the words \"starring\" with \"staring\".

person Savannah
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job!
Excellent,
You are an awesome person Des,

I love you....

Savannah