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become more and more wacky... i like that.. hope it will go much more crazy

Okay, I read all five chapters. And I must say that I am impressed. THERE IS A PLOT!! I mean there\'s a lot of sex. An impossible amount of sex (cheeky grin) but I am not complaining. Now there is one thing I don\'t understand. You had written a clear cut villian in Rileys dad, and a Hero in Jimmy. Now you made Jimmy a bastard and for no apparent reason. He\'s going to force Tammy to get raped..and for what?The women were coming to ~him~ even the dog was eventually coming to him and his harrem. Unless you\'re showing that absolute power corrupts absolutely. I\'m thinking a little karma is in order. Like him getting raped. Maybe by Riley. Because that boy is gay. Jacking that dog off and always cornholing the girls. Actually I would love to see Rileys dad switch the script on the novice Jimmy and order that. Makes me hot thinking about it. Anyway. If Jimmy is going to be the \"hero\" he really is going to far by forcing someone to be raped. A good master, dom, seme whatever nows what\'s too far. It seems that the only people who know this are the women but the guys, who have the control aren\'t listening. So if they continue not to listen I think you should put more warnings on your summary. like humil, rape, torture. Because that is what they are doing. And as much as I enjoy the tabooness of this fic, its those things the humilation, the rape and the torture which turns my stomach. The dog thing too but I was ~warned~ about that. And that made all the difference. Again. Good fic. Very hot.

It gets better with each chapter...I check a couple of times a day to see if you have updated...what a treat today to see 2 new chapters..Love this story, keep it up...(and hurry and bring Max back into the picture)

this has to be one of the highest quality posts i\'ve read in a long while. the story is funny, dark, sexual, and redneck-tastic. though i admit i have read only up to the fourth chapter this short story is compelling. you have all the elements, and more. i\'ve found something that i don\'t see in much incest/ slavery type posts, and that\'s the psychiatric point of view of the characters. though it does not dwell too long on these parts, its still realistic. the struggle with natalie and her mother when the main character tries to make them have sex with him. the split feelings, the moral and then ultimately giving up to the sexual. and then there is the struggle with riley and his father, this i didn\'t expect, it took a turn to a darker side of the story. i enjoyed this well written narrative very much. thanks

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Thanks for the replies . . . and the input. Yes indeed, dear young innocent Jimmy is turning to the darkside. Like turning a child always denied sweets loose in a candy store. Or is he? The perverseness and carnal lustings, once realized only in his dreams, late at night, lying back on his bed and in the safety of his bedroom, are now becoming real. Or are they? :) Are we seeing only Jimmy\'s dreams? A large majority of humanity fantasizes over such wanton behavior every day. Most men, for example, fantasize over any number of depravities and grossly offensive acts multiple times every day. What begins, in our youth, as innocent, childish thoughts of \"you show me yours and I\'ll show you mine\" turns into the nastiest most wanton kind of mental images and imaginings as we grow older. Does our dear Jimmy\'s actions shock you? Yes, indeed. Do you believe this innocent young lad would actually do them? In real life, would Jimmy so quickly become such a monster? Sadly, others have, as there are some among us who find it hard to separate reality from fantasy. Do not give up on Jimmy just yet. There are yet other paths he will travel.

i am apoled that you think that forcing people to do things aginst teir own will is right you definatly need to consider what its like to get rapped unless you have youll never understand the pian and disgrace that you fell when it happens its not a fun thing at all its one of the worst thing that could happen to you

Wow! I have to say, WOOF! is quite a dastardly deed! An invigorating tale, if I do say so myself. But, I have to buy a new keyboard now, thanks...Screen cleaner too...

Wow! Hot! Almost orgasmed by just reading it! Wow! I love incest.... and your words.......... amazing...
Great job... keep writing. Love to read more!

woow...is really WOOF!!!! continued please

OMG!!! you have to update again...soon...please...I am so wet from just reading about this....One thing though...would love to see Max get tied up to one of the younger girls...that would be awesome....