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by lordmerle

person me
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t let Tammy become Joe Bob\'s bitch...she just can\'t, she\'s too nice, and I just can\'t see it. At the very least, give Natalie to him, she deserves it (no offense but she asked to be a man\'s plaything). And don\'t let Jimmy become a Joe Bob....I like him just the way he is now.
person dixie cup
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, extremely hot and sexy. And as for that prick Joe Bob, let something horrible happen to him. I don\'t care what. Lol. And please (begs) don\'t let Jimmy turn our like Joe Bob! That would totally ruin the plot.
person Samsung HQS
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, sexy! I\'m into everything about this story...except for the bestiality. That I can do without. Otherwise, this shit is hot as hell!
person Jen
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re becoming better. Update soon
person Donn
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Jesus Mary and Joseph! Where the fuck do you come with this, son! Haha oh man, It\'s brilliant. You\'ve got some balls to post shit like this. I mean, DAMN! And I thought I had a twisted fantasies.
person Anja
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so good! Really turned me on and please update soon!
person gigi
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of those kinds of stories you know you shouldn\'t be reading, but you can\'t help yourself! All these \'intruiging yet kinky\' sexual acts are excellently written. And so smutty!! =D
person gd
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dam good story it has keep me ecitted thur out! i will be waiting for the next chapter. please don\'t make me wait to long.
person sminty
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so is tammy going to be his conscience? Is her pain going to keep him from becoming a monster? Because she is the only one being abused. Everyone else wants the abuse. She\'s stuck. Sure she can leave, but to go where? I really feel sorry for her . She is being peer persured into being raped, the abuse she ran away from, because the others like it. Actually, the others are just having rough sex. I am enjoying the other sex scenes though. Good job with the plot. Becareful with writing in too many characters. You don\'t want the ones you have to become flat, because you are trying to give everyone time. Oh and are you going to have someone ~not~ like this type of life and leave?
person tdk
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so unbelievably hot and twisted, I\'m almost speechless. All the sex scenes are a porno freaks wet dream. Hell, I need a fresh pair of undies myself after reading this latest chapter! Keep up the great work.