rate_review Reviews

pretty good...

Very good, keeping going. it\'s awesome.

HOT HOT HOT

w00t!

I\'d like to see more of Jimmy and Natalie...not so much their mom. Sarah and Tammy are also good ^^

but not so much their mom!

way did you post this chapter again, a have already raed it.post new ones
keep going and write a treesome please
bye

An explanation: I went back to correct some mistakes I\'d made in one of the chapters. Once you do that, it makes it look like you\'ve just added a chapter, as it pushes your work back up to the top of the list. Sorry to disappoint you on that, but from time to time I\'ll be going back and correcting errors. I\'ll try my best to update soon. At this very moment, I\'m reading through email from readers having suggestions of what they\'d like to see happen next. A couple of readers are anxious for me to add the donkey thing. And yes, there are those wanting a threesome and such things.

It\'s great getting your suggestions, especially from all you girls. I love a really sick, nasty female mind . . . :) In fact, I think a couple of you girls would do a much better job finishing this story.

In any case, please write if you have other recommendations. Be advised though, I\'m not wanting to add any more human characters to the story.

If you have a favorite character you\'d like to see developed more or take part is any special encounter, please let me know.

BTW - - - Feel free to post your favorite character below. Let me know which character you like best.

And thanks again for the reviews. If you\'d like to write me directly and not post here, send email to lordmerle@yahoo.com. I do answer email. Thanks again.

Verygood, i liked it, it was awesome. I like your writing style and the detail in the sex scenes. keep going with it.

great

lang time no see, keep writing and to a trio
post soon