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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I must read the rest.. this got me really hot!!
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update :(
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
youd think with the amount of cum getting shot around, someone would be pregnant by now.
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this story you are a talanted writer are you going to do more?
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my godness this is the best ive ever read. i hope you are going to write more. the people in your story are so beliveable its so amasing, i feal like i know them cant wait for chapter 26
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
life's been crazy hectic & i'm actually a bit bummed. i'm playing hooky from work & decided to peak around online 4 a bit see if anybody's written something decent while i've been away... how excited was i 2 see u'd updated this! Hell i was wet before i even read the chap (giggles) ok i felt totally compelled 2 leave a review as i'm in a much better mood now, horny as all hell, but better just the same. write something else hun, you know i'll totally read it ~_^
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY something hard core enough! fabulous creative inventive! and very descriptive :) so much so its driven me to write my first review, my only critique is to shy up on the scientific names it kills the mood if i tell a guy i want to create a vaccum feild around his falus, with the required help of my mandible.
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I just came here to thank you, my girlfriend came to me after she read it and because of you I got laid once more, I thank you man, I thank you.She had been away at her sisters for a week and I needed that shit. Thank you.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very exciting story that made me damn horny!!! I want more of this
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story! i would like to see more jimmy/natalie, jimmy/karen, or jimmy/tammy. those are HOT!
maybe less of the mother/ children though...
maybe less of the mother/ children though...