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for The Darkling

by Korde

person Amby
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re sick!!!...IT\'S AWESOME!!!
person Taishi
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, this is delicious. The pain. The blood. I love it. The boy died at the end, right? Cause you said \"sightless brown eyes\" so either he went blind or hes dead, or maybe hes in a coma. yeah, a coma. Write another chappy about his dreams while in a coma. Make it nice and gory. *rubbs hands together evily* Yes, more torture. then you could have him wake up after a couple of months andf have the darkling get him again. hehehehe. MUST HAVE MORE.....pwease.
person tani
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was really good.
person Xcin Serach
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!! The poor boy!!! >< >< >< *sniffle*

That was sad! And sadistic!!!! >< Even if it was short it was so alive! XD Your writing\'s great. XD

The poor kid! *cries*