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for Flame and Leah

by Tirch

person d
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story/writing rocks! keep updating por favor
person Dani Shafer
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe you have 1 review. I really really enjoyed your story, and can\'t wait for you to conitinue. Unlike most of the stories I find in the \"original\" cat. I really think you have a wonderful writing story. If you don\'t continue for any other reason, please update for me :) I can\'t wait to see what happens between these two love birds. I only ask you leave angst out of the picture. BTW Has Leah had a big \"O\" yet? LOL I love how your actually realistic. As a fanfic writer my self, I tend to get caught up in the allure of a male fantasy. Meaning: they can go all night, and multple O\'s.

Keep up the good work. Dani
person NoMoreShyGirl
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story. It was a little slow in the beginning, but got romantic in the middle and hot in the final two chapters. Is it over?

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