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OMG, I just read all you had posted. I must say for my first het fic its pretty awsome. ^^; Do post more. XD I\'d like to see what will happen next with this relationship and all.

--Eikim

dude the new chapter is like so cool.you rock. you writing is awesome . you have a gift that not alot of people have and from the locks of it you are using it very well.ok email me when you get this ^-^

I\'ve been reading this story since you first posted it and I think it\'s great. I like how you\'ve developed your characters so that we actually care about them, even the ones that aren\'t the main characters, like Leah\'s friend. Reading the new chapter, I must say that I was happy about what happened between Jodi and Flame...not because I like Jodi, or think that they should get back together...but it has added a more true-to-life element to it...small conflict without being too angsty...Good job over all! I can\'t wait to read more!

he\'s not going to tell her?! my gosh, he should know by now that people can find out things very very easily. if she finds out through the grapevine or from someone else, flame will have hell to pay. but then again, maybe that\'d make the story more fun, huh? but then that\'ll lead to other not so good things and then the drama might get out of control. hmm...i can\'t wait to see what you\'re going to do. flame better not cheat on leah again, or else he should just kill himself

Lies are more harmful to any relationship than anything else. I hope Flame figures that out sooner or later. If Flame wont\' tell her, I hope Lisa does. Great improvement in your writing! Can\'t wait to see what happens next!

im so hooked to this story. i can\'t believe flame kissed jodi like that. this is going to be a great story, how long is it going to be? keep updating!!

oh. my. god. i can\'t believe flame kissed her! i hope lisa tells leah...and leah better not forgive and forget. i am really fully hating flame right now. i hate him so much it\'s not even funny. being buzzed should be no reason to kiss your ex. argh.

The drama...I\'m curious as to what happens next...please update soon! But what I\'m guessing...Flame kissing his ex and NOT looking or feeling guilty (damn bastard. hope he goes to hell)=Flame still harboring feelings (of love?) for his ex=Flame should never have gotten with Leah and taken her virginity (poor Leah. my heart goes out to her)=Lisa should definitely tell Leah what she saw and Leah should leave Flame=Flame needs to really feel what loss and regret is. Only reason Flame would kiss her like that is if he still felt something for her. Poor poor Leah. I actually wanted to cry at the end of the chapter. It hurt knowing that Flame isn\'t truly a genuine guy. If he were, drunk or not he never would\'ve kissed his ex. Who knows how far they would\'ve gotten if Lisa didn\'t interrupt them.

This is a really nice story! Really romantic, and well written! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!

M.E.

Well, overall, I\'d have to commend you on this fic. You clearly know a lot about the rock culture of small local bands and clubs- as I do firsthand. That\'s good. You\'re writing what you know. Unfortunately, in contrast to that which you have so artfully depicted for your readers- there\'s a lot you don\'t seem know, or at least, are not making clear, about the nature of relationships. There is this happy-go-lucky awesomeness of being in love- but it\'s not all fun and games. Let\'s see a bit more conflict, because without your characters going through an overall arc of growth- what\'s the point?
That\'s just food for thought. But overall, I LOVE LOVE LOOOVE your fic- as I do boys with long blue hair.
DisappearedCat