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for Flame and Leah

by Tirch

person Brighteyes
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, just discovered this story, and I love it.

You did an amazing job with your characters.

Keep the good work coming
person lindsay
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. The relationship between Flame and Leah was so real.... an amazing. Good job.
person Michiru Kaiou
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, congrats. This story is great... and I\'m impressed that this is your first one. I hope you post more stories here in the future... I\'ll make sure to check. :)
person cass
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sequel! sequel! sequel! come on you know you want to, all the other kids are doing it.
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I commend you on your excellent fic, it was great, loved it heaps, hope i see more of your work, Cheers ^_^
person Tif
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*TEAR* I can\'t believe it\'s over. I really feel like crying.. This story was awesome! Flame fucked up but Leah managed to forgive him which is good. Im glad Chuck anc Callie are okay, and everything was just too damn good! You are an awesome writer and I can\'t wait to read more of you\'re work. WOPNDERFUL STORY!!!!
person jeanette
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude that was so cool. you rock. it had a cool ending and i hope you right more storys in the future. well it was cool to read you story and now its sad that it is over. but you have this cool givet so do stop writing.^_^
person jeanette
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dont*
person sourgirl
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::: claps ::: what a wonderful story!! i\'m really happy with the ending (i\'m a sucker for happy endings >.<) i hope that you will be coming out with a new fic soon because i just adore this one. great work! ::: claps :::
person lola
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD!! I LOVED IT!! IT CAN\'T BE OVER!!! Your an awesome writer, so please continue at least writing, if not this story then something else!