rate_review Reviews

Flame’s the perfect boyfriend. Seriously, kind, caring, gentle, understanding, and honest and he’s hot too! Lucky Leah.. She had a great first time. This is a very good story. Not filled with drama after drama like the others. The writing was very descriptive. I thought a good way to apologize to Leah was by writing a song for her and that would be the band’s sellout track but that might be too cheesy.. Like I said, great work!

Beautiful story, I enjoyed reading it.

Hi there, I just wanted to tell you that I followed your story all the way through and you had me worried when you split up Leah and Flame there for awhile near the end. You did an awesome job on this story and may I be so bold as to suggest and part 2? Keep up the good work in your writing!

I love it! Flame and Leah are perfect together...
I\'ve already read Why Bother? (I left a review there too)
You are a amazing writer... Congratulations for your hard work!
My next is: Starting Over, and I\'m pretty exited about that one.
Thank you for all the fun! Kisses!

I really enjoyed reading this story! I love how you developed the characters and the story was just amazing! This is the first story I have read of yours and it DEF wont be the last!

Bad? Ha! There was no bad!
I loved it!! PWP rocks!!
Actually read you\'re new fic first, and then saw this one. Now, I\'m wishing there was another one for me to read while you finish the new one. Still, your style is awesome and your plots are really cool. Although, I have to say, you had me really scared there for a minute when Chuck and Callie were in the hospital and that ordeal. I just kept thinking \"what? no, you can\'t kill Chuck! no, he had better not die!\", and then it was happy. (\'Course, me would have had to hurt someone if he or Callie had died.)

Keep up the great work!!
Kiri

yah!! this was wonderful , a truly romantic story. i really loved this story and encourage you to continue writing. great job on your first fanfiction & is it possible for a sequel to this story/ a spinoff with Jodi as the main character(just make sure it\'s not with Flame as the other main character)? good luck on your next fanfic!

I love this story so I had to review it. There were some grammar mistakes other than that you did an excellent job for your first fiction. Thanks for writing and actually finishing it. I look forward to read more stories from you. Please consider in making a sequel. Thanks.

I started reading and I couldnt stop. I just found this site about a week ago and have just been choosing stories at random. Some I started and couldnt finish. Some I kept falling asleep as I read. But yours I read straight through. And I only took 2 smoke breaks =) I will be reading more of your stories, I am sure of that. Keep it up. I am really surprized that this is the first fan fiction you have posted. You are really talented. You kept the story moving and added a couple of twists and turns that kept my attention. Thank You for posting this. I really enjoyed it. AWESOME JOB!!!

Hey. I loved your story. I loved how the connection between Flame and Leah just seemed so right. I cried when they broke up and was so happy when they got back together. i really hope to read another one of your stories soon. Hannah xoxoxo.