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...a little more detail would help, it was *way* too fast, slow down and the more specifics the better

don\'t worry about what the others are saying, this is a PWP, not an essay! i think it was perfectly sexy and really hot.

Elly, so are you saying that when one writes PWP one can skip basic things like spelling and grammar? Sheesh. They weren\'t flaming the writer. They were giving helpful constructive criticism.

First off, try a double space between each paragraph. It makes it easier for the audience to read, and it\'s less strain on the eyes. Second, definitely need to check spelling and grammar before you post it. And third, punctuation and pronoun misuse made it a little difficult to understand. Don\'t think of this as a flame, but as very constructive criticism. Keep up the good work.

You may want to consider using paragraphs. It would be much easier to read than seeing a huge block of text.