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for Lingering Love

by SerenaSparkle

person ree
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OKAAAAYYY!!!!!!! that was...interesting! i, uh totally dug the way you...you typed the story...i guess?
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot. The language is a bit wooden at times but oddly enough I think it underscores the intensity of this girl\'s obsession. It\'s all kind of melancholy to me, but *extremely* hot at the same time. Nice work :)
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was intriguing, and hot, almost as hot as the dream I had yesterday, but I doubt much could beat that, rolling all my fantasies into one dream ::Trails off::