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for To Paint a Straight Line

by SerenaSparkle

person ree
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was really good and i hope to check out other stories from you!
person Suicidal Skies
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just divine. Lovely hot and erotic.
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very steamy if not completely erotic. She was such a tease from the beginning. I like seeing women who are content with their sexuality and know how to use it. This was a nice read and did a fine job of \'captivating the senses\' Keep up the good work.
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm I liked the new begining made the tale even hotter heh
person drake220
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i didn\'t think you could make this hotter but you did. impressive. now if only serena could get her wish, hint hint....