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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really enjoyable and you employed one of my favorite technique's for inciting animosity (that'll turn into something yummy) between two characters. My only complaint to this catchy story is that there are several spelling mistakes. I understand perfectly though if it's because of formating and the like. Not all websites or computers like to work together.
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lufff it. COntinue it please?
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t want to wait any longer, pleas please PLEASE!!!!! write another chap!!
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! Pweeeeeeeeeeeease????/
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve read Laurell K. hamilton\'s series!! The browning(the gun), human servants and the children vampire \"nikolas\" (Or however you spelled it) Gave it away. ^_^ I luv it. PLEASE update soon!! This story is veeery interesting...
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hum...let me see how can I say it....I\'m liking your story, but not loving it. I think there is something missing, but I\'m not sure if I know what is it.
Until now your main character is a little empty...and the chapters lack some information about what is really happening or who are who or why they are there. Of course it could be your intention but it\'s a little....well, not exactly my type of text. (I know I\'m being inconsistent because I\'m reading it and I\'m liking so I shouldn\'t be complaining, but...I think you deserved to know exactly what I think when I\'m reading the chapters).
Btw...I agree with the person who said the chapters are too short. When I\'m starting to be into it...the chapter finishes. (and sorry for my terrible English...I can read better than I can write).
Until now your main character is a little empty...and the chapters lack some information about what is really happening or who are who or why they are there. Of course it could be your intention but it\'s a little....well, not exactly my type of text. (I know I\'m being inconsistent because I\'m reading it and I\'m liking so I shouldn\'t be complaining, but...I think you deserved to know exactly what I think when I\'m reading the chapters).
Btw...I agree with the person who said the chapters are too short. When I\'m starting to be into it...the chapter finishes. (and sorry for my terrible English...I can read better than I can write).
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Please update soon!!!
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It sounds ALOT like Anita Blake. Was that your intention or just the way you write?
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>.> Damn you, and your darnded cliffhangers! *Winces, and crosses her arms, a pout across her lips.* I still liked it though, it was nicely written, and I cant wait to see what will happen next.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, I like the idea of the story, but I dont like the fact that the chapters are so short. Bleh, anyways keep up the good writing, and update real soon, thank you.