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Okay so I'm gonna read chapter 29 now... and this is the one where Dicky goes out and doesn't come home I just know it. But I can deal with this I can, he's just a fictional character even though I totally love him...

*finishes the chapter, and promptly starts bawling her eyes out* I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I HATE YOU!!! *wails*

Except that I saw it coming. Duh. he's a cop. And i sorta sneak-read the reviews. Me very bad girl. *blows nose*

If you are making Drew get together with that creep he shagged in NY, I'll never forgive you.

*finishes chapter 32, squeals loudly - again* SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I loved the Dicky scene.


*finishes reading the rest of the story* wow. simply wow. I mean totally wow. Brilliant. beautiful. marvellous. brilliant. and a thousand more words that mean the same things.

Except that you broke my heart when you killed Dicky.

this was a wonderful story. i laughed, i cried, i didn't go to sleep until way past my bedtime. however, i can't forgive you for killing dicky. i'm sorry, but that's just the way it is.

I really enjoyed your story about Andrew Payne. I started reading the series on Saturday and was able to finish it by Sunday, it had me captivated from the beginning. When I started reading I was wondering where could you go with a story about basically such an a*s and make him a likeable character? Well, I ended up liking and caring enough about him to have even cried with him when his Dicky died.
I think you did a fabulous job. There were a couple of continuance slip-ups that I saw however they were not a distraction and I thought overall the story was EXCELLENT.
Thank you for your hard work and wonderful story.


Shelly

<3 Yum.

I\'ve read your whole story over the course of three days. It\'s brought me laughter, tears and everything in between. You have a true gift for writing and tugging at a person\'s heartstrings.

Although--
I have noticed that this story has a few points that were the same from City of Bones by Michael Conelly: Both Richard and Harry Bosch (from City of Bones) were cops; both Richard and Harry Bosch were shot in the story; both Jessica and Julia Brasher (from City of Bones) commit suicide; along with Richard, Andrew, Harry Bosch\'s ages.

Nyeh. I was sad it had to end. I read the bit were you said there was only two more chapters and I screamed. Lol.

Much love, Helena.

your right i thought more about it and it seems like a good idea to kill of dicky, it sets more drama and makes it more interesting.
i wanna aplogize for bitching about dicky dieing

Wow, I just finished reading all 33 parts of this amazing story. I have to say this is absolutely awesome. The drama made me cry and squee for happiness at times. This was definitely engaging and refreshing. Wonderful job!

Nice ending, I thought it was a bit rushed, but all in all good. I think the story was well worth your time, as you can probably tell by the numerous reviews you\'ve gotten during the writting. I\'m still sad about Dicky dieing but you ended it very well. Perhaps your next story could be about some characters pertaining to this story. Thanks so much, I had a blast reading this story. One of my favorite stories.

Great chapter! I\'m really sad that its over cause I really liked this story. Of course I\'m still mad at you for have Dicky died. But Tyler isn\'t so bad. I\'m also really happy that Damon found love, I hope it last. Your next story could be about them maybe.