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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! I fell in love with Andrew Payne very quickly. His story after college was real and emotional. You made me cry when Richard died, but it ended well with meeting Tyler. You are an excellent writer. Ever thought of getting this story published? You should.
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dicky dying made me bawl like a baby, *cry* i cried for the rest of the chapters after. :(
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has been an amazing story and i've loved and sometimes hated every minute of it, when i say hate i mean in a good way i cried so much when Richard died it was so sudden. i had so much more to say about each little section but i've been reading since midnight and it's now around 4:30 so it's all gone out of my head. but keep writing and since i'm reviewing this one, i have to say continue with truth behind the lies i want more cause your a damn good story writer!
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
still at chapter 4 love the story so far ^__^, love the argument about his job
Thank you ^___^
Thank you ^___^
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was soo good it was like u were telling the life of someone real i really like the way u ended it keep up the good work!!!!
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Not good at reviewing, but just wanted to let you know I enjoyed your story very much.
I'm thankful that you guys are willing to spend so much time writing - know us readers aren't good at giving feedback - sorry!
Love,
Lisser
Not good at reviewing, but just wanted to let you know I enjoyed your story very much.
I'm thankful that you guys are willing to spend so much time writing - know us readers aren't good at giving feedback - sorry!
Love,
Lisser
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March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shit. Everytime I see Dicky I start crying. T-T I was seriously not kidding. I knew it was gonna happen the moment SWAT came into the picture. I think its a wonderful story and I just read the whole thing as a whole so I would know. Wonderfully bittersweet towards the end. Gives many life lessons. Things dont always go as smoothly as one plans. I am glad this is such a *great* sequel to the other one. I almost didnt read it becayse Andrew Payne sounded like a-- nerd. But I am SO glad I did. No you did not waste a year of your life on this.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*finishes chapter 5, rubs her eyes and yawns* Okay so I really should be heading off to bed right no- thirty more chapters!? SCREW bed!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*finishes chapter 26* SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! *throws herself at author, beaming* it's so cute cute cute cute cute cute cute cute I mean oh my god it's so cute and totally awww and *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!*
except I really think Angel is totally fishy.
except I really think Angel is totally fishy.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heellooo!! *yells at Damon at the end of chapter 27* asshole warnings here!!! in abundance!! what sort of crap is that "he'll dump me if i don't give it up" well then dump HIM cause he doesn't respect you one zit if that's the case!!! *rants for another ten minutes*
I've got to stop commenting on every single chapter since this fic was posted, like, ages ago and completed, but hey that's me, can't shut up... and I call em as I see em. and that Angel just seems like a big bloody jackass, pardon my french!
I've got to stop commenting on every single chapter since this fic was posted, like, ages ago and completed, but hey that's me, can't shut up... and I call em as I see em. and that Angel just seems like a big bloody jackass, pardon my french!