rate_review Reviews

Okay this is really good here. I liked that you ended where you did. But add more chapters if you\'re going to continue the story. A sequel might be a tad crappy for this story. Also I liked the seduction in this chapter too. Keep up on the good work and now I have to get myself a sandwich cuz I havn\'t eaten in 8 hours. Bye!

You have to write more! I am too in love with Evan for this to be over! Really, though, great story so far. The characters are so vivid. I\'d love to get to know the football player more. There\'s so much more opportunity to expand. Come on, a couple more chapters, you know you want to, all the kids are doing it...

I loved this. It was great. You managed to make everyone happy. Please make more chapters! I\'m waiting to see what happens next.

Yeah! A new chapter! I loved it. I know some people aren\'t, but I\'m crazy about the Jason & Evan pairing. They seem so different and yet complimentary. You\'ve got a lot of writing talent. Thanks for finding the time to write something that\'s so enjoyable to read.

When is this going to be updated??? I\'m dying!!!

This was truly one of the best stories I\'ve come across in a long time. It was sweet, sexy, surprising, hot and I can\'t wait to see what happens next. I love all the characters so much, it\'s hard to figure out who I want with whom! Although I am crazy about the E/J pairing. It\'s innocent and explorative and honest. Just my thoughts.

I really like the story and it\'s really really hot! but you might want to ease up on the \"man\"s that you put almost after every dialogue. dunno if guys actually talk like that where you\'re from. but other than that, the story fuckin\' rocks!!!

the shower scene was HOT ^_^! I actually think its better not to date friends. Even if you are in love with them. Or think that you are in love with them. A lot of time people mistake that true love of friendship for somethings else. Especailly when they are lonely. I am gland you didn\'t go there. That way, there is always someone on Andy and Jason\'s side. A friend to be their rock. I like the captian of the football angle. ^_^ Like I said the shower scene was hot! I hope they can make it out of high school without scandle. but with lots of hot sex in public places. ^_^ I think it would be fun read.

hmmm

*kills evan*

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*kills andy too b/c he\'s an idiot*


*steals Jason*