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for Of Best Friends and Lovers

by bean1498

person Kinomoto Neko
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great story, I can't wait for more! ^_^

Neko
person D-Puppy
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapt 3 again. Hotter than hell. And the flirting it sweet. These two are good at the begining.
person DPuppy
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanna say I\'m reading it again and falling in love all over. I just finished the first two chapters and gonna go brake cuz I gotta go do stuff. Well I didn\'t see much of a difference in the man\'s not that those really bothered me. But not much to really take notice in the first chapter just some really arousing scenes. And in the part where Andy talks about how people react to him and how he says he was born gay and it wasn\'t like a disease that twisted his brain, that really hit home. My mom said and still does that being gay goes against nature and that I\'m killing myself rightaway, and that what I have is a mental disease. I don\'t believe it but it hurts me when I think about it and I\'m glad that there is a character in this story that I realize just now I relate to. Probably why this is my favorite story. Well that\'s all that I wanted to say about the first 2 chapters. Oh and if you are writing a sequel or something might I suggest if you want to send future chapters to me....
person DPuppy
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t kill me, but.....YOU NEED TO CREATE ANOTHER ROMANCE STORY LIKE OF BEST FRIENDS AND LOVERS! Can you tell I\'m your somewhat pushy fan?....Bye have a good one.
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oookk, that was good, now that\'s the first time i\'ve actually had anything positive to say about a slash fic!!

Yeah, and continuing with it would be good, i will be looking out for it!!
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah i forgot to mention STOP SAYING YOUNG MAN!!! that was so damn annoying!!! Young Man did not suit ANY sentence in that story, and also most of your usage of man was NOT suitable

Just had to say it!
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah i forgot to mention STOP SAYING YOUNG MAN!!! that was so damn annoying!!! Young Man did not suit ANY sentence in that story, and also most of your usage of man was NOT suitable

Just had to say it!
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah i forgot to mention STOP SAYING YOUNG MAN!!! that was so damn annoying!!! Young Man did not suit ANY sentence in that story, and also most of your usage of man was NOT suitable

Just had to say it!
person DPuppy
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay please update. *Gives Cute Puppy Look* Pwese?
person DPuppy
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay please update. *Gives Cute Puppy Look* Pwese?