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for Tonight it's Just Us

by Ametank

person Sashi
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! And your other original. Wish you'd right more of them...
person Cameron
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good keep writing.
person Nikki
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I claim u... therefore I am ur master/mistress/ w/e... therefore I can command u and i command u to write more!
person Katt
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely awesome, evocatively erotic, I thank you for the pleasure of your words, off now to see if you have any more of them for me to read, grins. Really hoping you have a bunch of stories about these characters, if not WRITE MORE, lol. thanx again
Katt
person Ax_Lover_Cassie
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the twist!! Really well written!!!
person Tamura
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the way you write it so that up until the end, you think you\'re reading actual events and then even after you finish, you\'re not quite sure if it was a dream of hers or not.
person loopypants
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! I hope there are more chapters to come:)
person DarkMystic
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Damn, I would be thanking him for the dream, seriously lol. Nice story by the way, cant wait to see what else happens, update soon please.
person Tamela
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was beautiful!! Erotic and exciting!! Wonderful story telling! Thank you!