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October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A fun little romp with just enough fantasy to be entertaining without being flowery or obtrusive. Very entertaining, and worth reading over multiple times. Good job!
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just got throught the second chapter and plan to finish the rest sometime within the next couple days. I liked the way you characterized the nature of Neldar's service to 'king and country', as well as his views on the matter. Makes for a pretty beleivable soldier.
As for the rest, good writing, good flow.
Good luck with future writing.
As for the rest, good writing, good flow.
Good luck with future writing.
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re the best lemon writer EVAH!!
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU SO TOTALLY ROCK DUDE!! YOU ARE THE BEST LEMON WRITER OUT THERE, MAN!!
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER...CAN\'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE...
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...you must update again, and soon...So the twins are elves...that was a nice twist...
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHH!! DAMN YOU, DAMN YOU, DAMN YOU!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!
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February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story...can\'t wait to read more...
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aahhh!! You can\'t kill him, you just can\'t!! (And I\'d LOVE to see a sex scene between Neldar and the Dyrad.) I can\'t get enough of that kick-all-freaking-ass blowjob of yours!!
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually skip lemons with plots, but if you\'re writing it, I\'ll read anything. :D LOVE the cock-sucking scene, DAMN was it hot! Will Neldar sleep with those two bros? God I love yaoi! Keep up the good work, and write as fast as you can!