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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a bit of a blunt ending, but i am not sure if it wasnt fitting at the same time! So if you are happy with it, leave it as it is, it is good!
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it but I think the ending was a bit too abrupt and that there wasn\'t enough character build up for Mitch to suddenly just decide not to do anything. There really didn\'t seem to be much reason for him to have kids up until the very end and up until the end they had no relevance so it kinda just came out of the blue. I think you can do better, but in any case still very good!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad....the ending seemed a little too rushed though....I dunno. I\'m not a fan of it. it was a good ending, but it seemed that he decided way too quickly.
~caroline
~caroline
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn I want to meet this guy... he sounds... ~grins~
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dayam... he rigged that drink!
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! Brilliant! You must have played Immoral Studies for this reminds me of that game!
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it, you stole my idea and made it suck!
FUCK YOU!
FUCK YOU!
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What did he put in her drink??? Something special....hurry with an update
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So was that one of those date rapeing drugs. How sad, I thought that she was starting to like it lol;)
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic!! Please update soon.