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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my... poor girl...
good story^^
good story^^
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does he feel remorse? Add another chapter!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read the second chapter and had to comment. The “Open up… that’s a good girl” line freaked me out! I knew it was going to be a non-consent story but that line made me shiver. Anyway, just had to let you know. I clicked on this story because you asked for more reviews and I was like \'what the heck.\' It\'s good, though. I\'m going to go finish it now!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter four, another comment. Dude, Mitch is fucking evil. In every sense of the words (heh). This is a good story though, the sex is nice (hehe, I guess I have a masochistic streak in me) and I can\'t wait to see if Mitch faces the repercussions he sooo deserves. Nice writing.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter five (you write well enough so that I have to comment a lot, haha): Agh! Doesn\'t she realize the drink\'s drugged?!? Though I guess as a reader I have the luxury of not being scared out of my mind. She probably has other things she\'s concentrating on. Anyway, just had to comment on that.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the ending of the sixth chapter was great. Loved the imagery of the disgraced angel thing, it was absolutely perfect for the story. You\'re such a good writer, I wish I had your skill! Looking eagerly to the next chapter. Adding you to my recommended reading list!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update! It is far from done!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
he already did alot of shit to her mine as well let him get her pregnent or something
although i really don\'t approve of teacher student relations i don\'t think she really has
a choice so update soon
although i really don\'t approve of teacher student relations i don\'t think she really has
a choice so update soon
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ma\' thinkin\', I\'ma\' thinkin\'...