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for Jäger: Tod Von Einem Langen Verlorenen

person Phex

schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Hey I quite liked the story. Lovely characters. Just one question: German isn\'t your mother tongue, is it? I would translate \"death of a long lost\" like this: \"Tod eines lange Verlorenen\"
So keep up the good work.

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