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for Punishment Without A Crime

by Siarra

person DancingMadTophatter
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...I love this, the mystery behind it all was fantastic, not to mention your descriptions are wonderful. I adore the way you described everything, I can\'t wrod how I feel about this piece, it was wonderful to read, I\'m very glad I found it. You\'re a good writer, a very good writer, keep up the wonderful work!
person Memento Mori
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was almost cruel where you left off... but fun at the same time. *grins*

by the way, i love your pen name.
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh, yeah baby...hehe..I liked it, cutting to the chase ;) I really liked the whip and the candle wax, and you\'re left sort of mystified by who the people are, it\'s all good;)
Thanx by the way for reviewing my story Innocent Dreams, it\'s my very first one...and I do agree that reviews make the world a happier place.
Take care!
love/Angel
person Shredded_Rose
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great. I really enjoyed reading this, and I thought it was done very classily. -Applauds- Heh, I especially liked the whipping, and it was just so great...all of it. Hell, thanks for writing it. Nice job. I also noticed from your Pen-name that you might be a David Gemmell fan? If you are, nice.
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo this was just delicious! =) great description and i liked how we didn\'t know who was doing all the teasing and whipping. maybe there should be another one... lol.

i think i will be doing another m/m eventually.. right now i am focusing on \'The Riders of Ebony\' maybe ill put some in there... hmm now that is a good thought!

Thank you for your comment on \'A Sweet Sin in the Night\'

*Silent Writer*