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for Punishment Without A Crime

by Siarra

schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW! O.O LOVED IT!!! I wish the end was a little more conclusive...but I love a happy ending, and I kinda wish everything would end with sunshine and rainbow! THis was great!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. Hot. I think that might have blistered. I love the style and to be honest I think it suits you very well. And though it's extremely belated, thank you so much for reviewing my Kingdom of Heaven piece, I greatly appreciated it.
person SongOfInsanity
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*orgasms and falls to the ground* ...That was so hot....Please please please write more!
person yamiskoi
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetheart!! Okay there are so many great things about this. First of all, the title. It's almost like a spoiler for what you know is going to happen (Especially when there's yaoi involved, lol). And now, the fic. You have a great writing style, and a definitely tortorous way of conveying what's happening between the two men. The part where the dominant gie says 'So helpless and yet so eager' Really got me going. You write yaoi so well, my dear. I pray you, write more, as soon as the writer's block fully clears. ^_~

X ~ yamiskoi ~ X
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW.... that was... just WOW. Damn!!!! talk about hot... I loved the whole thing: the story, the description was so vivid and exception it's amazing, the mistery behind it, braking the usual 'everyhting's gotta happen for a reason or with a story' thingy... I loved it, and I'm not a very much fan of bondaging and torturing, but this story defenitely called my attention. Thanks for sharing, it's great!!!
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Quite well done indeed, such vivid description. I never know who either of the characters are...but in the end, it doesn\'t matter. You have such a way with detail, making sure the audience knows exactly what\'s happening the entire time. Very nice! It\'s wonderful to see a decently written peice among so much of the scrabble these days. ^_^
person Cas
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t usually read this genre, but I was curious. Well written - enjoyed it. Liked how the stranger remained a stranger, and the description of the main character\'s reactions. The end was a bit abrupt, but could be it only came too soon because I was lost in it :)
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read this before. ^^ Boy, that was just... Yep, that was just. I don\'t know what should follow \"just\" so we\'ll leave it there. I\'m not fond of the sort of.. non-con situations (having been personally involved in one myself) but as an art form, that was very well executed. ^^

-Karie
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm. \"Torture\" with unknown strangers belong to my favourite genres.... a bit more personal thoughts, perhaps? (at least that\'s how I would do it.) Fine to read!
person Petrez
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome, plain and simple