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for Please, Sir

by AcidTrip

person Anon
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::pant::So FUCKING hot, OMG where have you been! you most definatly need to write more, espically with the dirty little whore and his Japanese master ::smiles lewdly thinking of all the possiblities:: Hope you write more!!!!
person Guilty
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it...So cute ^_^

~death comes by trial
person Me
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JUMMY!! hehehe write more plz ^^
person Suicidal Skies
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, nice XD
person Anja
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That\'s really hot, please write more! It made me soo wet
person LDG
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! This was a really good sex scene! I think think you should write another story about them! That would be so cool!