AFF Fiction Portal
person Waiting_Forever
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is exactly the kind of story I love to hear/read. Hopefully you are still writing this story. And I hope they start making those heirs soon.
person Amber
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is a wonderful story! I hope that you plan on continuing it soon! More please please please!
person jay
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it\'s exciting... but i reckon they fell in love too quickly, regardless of love at first sight or not. the speed of acceptance just makes the plot a little predictable and it loses the tension that would make this a better story. still, it\'s very good. historial fics aren\'t easy to write, and i admire your effort. well done.
person Angry Girl With Red Balloon
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why don\'t people finish their stories? Its really good, but now it NEEDS to be finished.
person BelieveInMe
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, well thought out story. Well developed plot and lovable characters, can\'t wait to see more installments.
person Michiru Kaiou
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighs contentedly* new chapters! and good ones at that :) I like where the story is going... I look forward to more
person L.
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story immensely. Keep it going.
person Michiru Kaiou
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the second or third story I\'ve read by you...? Anyways, time period and everything is totally up my ally! You must finish!! The characters are so lively and real... can\'t wait for more *hint hint*
person Phairesse
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have made a good start...the set up is good and I like your characters...the flow of the narrative is easy and quite readable...
I hope you continue.
person Anna
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update quick! i love this story