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this is pretty good. extremely short though. i have seen reviews longer than that chapter (no offense just helpful critisism)

It\'s far, far too short to draw any kind of conclusions. But one that is immediately obvious is that you very badly need to use a spell checker, or if you don\'t have access to one then find a beta reader who can read your work, correct mistakes and give it back to you. But if you want a serious critique from anybody then you\'ll have to write a lot more than just one chapter. The idea is an interesting one, though.