rate_review Reviews

I am really liking this story. The switching of point of view is interesting and the characters interact with one another nicely. good job

I really enjoy your story so far. I like how you show both character\'s perspectives in the same situation. It is obvious that you put a fair amount of thought in your characters. It would be nice if your chapters were a little longer, but I\'m only saying that because I enjoyed reading this so much.

While slow to pick up at first, Apollo\'s work is very engrossing! His character development is lush, and both the heroes are very much alive when you read them. He uses an interesting style of portraying the same series events from both characters perspectives, which gives us up to the minute insight on just whats going on inside either of them at any given moment! I for one, can\'t wait to see how this slow-cooker recipe for love turns out! We love ya Apollo!

YAY
new chapters!!!!

That was AWESOME

I love how they\'re both on the same page, but don\'t know it!

Very well written, a little confusing with the switch in pov\'s at first till I realized that you were going for a different look on it...Both of your charries seem rather well thought out. I would like to see it continue...I mean, you know that the two of them are gonna hook up at some point, but is it gonna be easy? Or angsty? Please, update soon!!!

OOOH, I\'m liking where this could go...

I\'m REALLY REALLY intrested in what\'s going to happen!!

consider this a mark in the MORE collumn...

that being said: I really like your style... the way you\'re doing both points of view, but part way into each scene...

it\'s really working...