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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY are you the SAME Apollo that reviews \"Final Lover\'s Decsent\" little down?! So cool,lol! Update soon. I just get so caught up in this story,it feels like were a 3rd person viewing the events between these 2! Also I wonder how Justin story ends? Will his Ex come back in the future and try to ruin his new relationship? Also who\'s going to be on top?! Just asking,cuz I forgot. Hmm,Desmir more like it! UPDATE SOON PLZ,byes!^^
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Update soon.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you must continue!
I am loving this :)
I am loving this :)
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squee! I\'m finally reviewing this...and finally actually read the rest of the chapters....lol. I\'m lazy. ^^ But I really like it and the character of Desmir (I probably mispelled that) is very intriguing...there seems to be more there than meets the eye. The last chapter (7? I think) seemed a little rushed, if only because of word repetitions, but the intent was still clear and it was till interesting. I can\'t wait to see where this goes...and I hope they work out. They sound like such a cute couple! :D
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cannot wait for them to go into conversation! I want to know more about these two! Building a mystery...
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is so well written! The characters seem so real and I can associate with their situations. I also like Justin\'s own story, which is kind of like a story within a story!*Genius, I know!* I am hoping for an update soon because you left another cliffhanger! Please write soon!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really liking it!
cannot wait for the date ^^
cannot wait for the date ^^
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY FILLER!!!
and this was great! for filler, it sure was long!!
lol
I liked the Jones\'s... I assume there will be more of them?
interrupting their date, perhaps?
heh, I hope not...
BRING ON THE LOVE!!!
NO ANGSTY PULL PEOPLE APART MOVES!!
*laughs at her own dork-osity*
great job, as always!
*thanks for the email notification, by the way... I wouldn\'t have found it otherwise!*
and this was great! for filler, it sure was long!!
lol
I liked the Jones\'s... I assume there will be more of them?
interrupting their date, perhaps?
heh, I hope not...
BRING ON THE LOVE!!!
NO ANGSTY PULL PEOPLE APART MOVES!!
*laughs at her own dork-osity*
great job, as always!
*thanks for the email notification, by the way... I wouldn\'t have found it otherwise!*
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KYA!!
They\'re going on a date!!!
a REAL ONE!!!
*jumps up and down*
lol
and wow... talk about realism... the conversation was so...
REAL
like, how one would ACTUALLY go... that\'s hard to do, and still keep it interesting...
Usually, I\'m yelling at the screen WE KNOW THIS ALREADY!!! *convenietly forgetting that the character doesn\'t*
didn\'t do that with this...
nope nope nope
*major thumbs up for surprising me with TWO new chappies!!!*
They\'re going on a date!!!
a REAL ONE!!!
*jumps up and down*
lol
and wow... talk about realism... the conversation was so...
REAL
like, how one would ACTUALLY go... that\'s hard to do, and still keep it interesting...
Usually, I\'m yelling at the screen WE KNOW THIS ALREADY!!! *convenietly forgetting that the character doesn\'t*
didn\'t do that with this...
nope nope nope
*major thumbs up for surprising me with TWO new chappies!!!*
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I got to the first chapter so far, need to read the rest tomorrow or whenever I\'m not yowling in agony from this damn tooth >_< but anyway! The beginning of this chapter actually had me crying...more from past issues with myself but it ooh! Things don\'t make me cry that often >< I like how this is ending up so far and I promise I\'ll read the rest as soon as I can! Thanks for giving me something to do! You can\'t IMAGINE how bored I\'ve been lately -_- it\'s awful...
- Ryoko
- Ryoko