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for The World is a Story...

by ApolloImperium

person Pout
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I was hoping for just a sweet little love story, but I can see you\'re going to throw some angst in. Will you put up a warning when it happens so I know to have a tissue to cry in/pillow to beat up on when stalker boy makes his appearance? (Not saying that it will be Justin\'s ex, but anyone that tails you is officially a stalker in my book!)


Oh btw, isn\'t the military grand?! They swing you around like a line dance partner on crack and expect you to ask for another dance. Of course, you get another dance whether you want one or not, but all that frustrations makes a great muse. So sorry you got jerked, but I know the story will be great because of it! :)
person Sandra
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too bad that you can\'t update :(
No, this chapter had a better end even if it\'s not perfect :P But I still love this story and will sit here waiting for you to come home and update :D
person supergirlanna
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wha??? ur going somewhere??? but u can\'t go! we\'re on the best part! their about to get down... *starts crying* but ur reviewers will die with such a pastion filled cliffhanger!!!
person Dadella
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww, I\'m so touched that you commented like that in the A/N...
*hugs*

and wow... I was SOOOO waiting for that kiss in the end, but then he pulled back to take off the jacket, and I was like NOOOO!!!

it actually brought me back to MY first date with this guy, and I rewrote the ending in my head to fit what I wanted to happen there, and I SO saw it working...

and then in the VERY end of your chapter *darn you and your cliffhanger-ish ways* I was like SQUEAK!!!

>^_^<

loving it, and BE CAREFUL IN CUBA!!
I know it\'s not exactly a warzone, and thank the gods it\'s not Iraq, but still... be careful, and I anxiously await your return and MORE OF YOUR STORY!!!!!!!
person Trickster Kitsune
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! What a place to leave the story at. When you get back, you\'ll definitely have me running back to the story. ^_~

When they finally kissed, I felt such a warm and fuzzy feeling. Hehehe...

Well, good luck on whatever you\'ll be doing in Cuba and I hope you get back soon and safely!
person supergirlanna
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok ok i\'ll review... but only because i really really want to know what\'s going to happen next!!! and i am really really enjoying the story!!! keep it up!!! post more... more!!! we need... MORE!!!!
person Trickster Kitsune
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
--sends a review to the poor starving muse--

I don\'t think I\'ve reviewed this story yet. Bad me. But I like it! It\'s moving at a slow pace, but I guess that\'s better than just jumping to the \"good stuff\"; it makes the relationship seem more realistic. And how evil of you... Leaving the chapter at a spot like that. --shakes fist--

Please update soon!
person Hannah
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Love the story so far, makes me feel all giddy inside lol! Anyway, your doing great I hope you update soon because I\'m going to be checking everyday :) HAPPY FRIDAY!! Love ya Bunches!


Hannah
person Sandra
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can\'t end the chapter like that! You are evil! Don\'t take it to personal, cause you are a wounderful author aswell. I haven\'t read anything this good for long now. I hope that you update soon becuase I can\'t wait to se what will happen. By the way, what rating is this story, I forgot to check that :P

person Dadella
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!
not a ONE??
holy crap, I can\'t believe it!!
*I have an excuse, if I didn\'t make it, I\'ve been in an accident... kinda hard to review stories when you\'re stuck on a couch with nothing but an aching body to keep you company*

anywho: I\'m SO glad that Justin wasn\'t too torn up about the difference in upbringing... I could see him being all sad, and dispondant... and the waitress is AWESOME!!

*suddenly gets suspicious*
WHOO is the person in the car?
who, I say WHO?????


this is ABSOLUTELY aweful!!

it\'s a mean person, come to hurt them, ISN\'T it????

*pats the boys*
*hugs them to keep them safe*

woo, I get crazy too, late at night...
well, *tosses the muse CHOCOLATE, cause chocolate is good*