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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting turn of events. You've certainly been enjoying taking it slowly and that is marvelous in this. Looking forward to seeing what happens after - what the car is, what happens in his story, and when things turn sour for our tall dark and handsome. *w* Nicely done!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is this story finished?! It cannot be! I want to read more and fast! I just love the characters and I am graving to know what will happen! ^^
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 review -
You definitely hooked me right away. [grin]
You\'ve described so well the thought processes writers go through. (Yes, even the amatures like me.) It\'s always an amazing struggle to decide what to say when folks ask you what you write.
I have finally gotten to the point I just admit \'slash\'. At least half those I tell think that means \'slasher\' - but I\'m slowly educating the world.
Diving into your next chapter now!
You definitely hooked me right away. [grin]
You\'ve described so well the thought processes writers go through. (Yes, even the amatures like me.) It\'s always an amazing struggle to decide what to say when folks ask you what you write.
I have finally gotten to the point I just admit \'slash\'. At least half those I tell think that means \'slasher\' - but I\'m slowly educating the world.
Diving into your next chapter now!
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 review -
phooey, I have errands and have to stop reading for the moment.
But I love your story and your characters. I\'ll definitely be back!
phooey, I have errands and have to stop reading for the moment.
But I love your story and your characters. I\'ll definitely be back!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve been so kind to read and review my story the least I can to is do the same. What can I say but awesome, man. I\'ve read the whole thing in nearly one sitting, I liked it that much. I\'m drawn to the characters and care about what happens. I keep writing if do, deal? LOL
Later, Peccavi
Later, Peccavi
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you\'re getting time to work on the next chapter. You have me so enthralled by this story that I am actually anxious to read it. I have a bad habit of reading an entire book in one sitting when I find one l like. So maybe I\'m just impatient. Guess it\'s a flaw. Anyway, I anxiously await your next chapter!
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Eight
That is so sad. All of it. But especially being treated as less than human. I know how that feels even though it is for different reasons. I don\'t follow my parent\'s style of living. Now that they are old, I am not judged, at least not to my face. But, I know what it\'s like to be told I\'m going to go to hell. I also know what it\'s like to be different and not be able to change it. It\'s who I am now. However, it is still hard for me to imagine your world. I can think that people who are intolerant of a person\'s preferences are \'silly\'. But that term is way too mild. How does one cope? Hopefully, your story will enlighten me.
Snowfall
That is so sad. All of it. But especially being treated as less than human. I know how that feels even though it is for different reasons. I don\'t follow my parent\'s style of living. Now that they are old, I am not judged, at least not to my face. But, I know what it\'s like to be told I\'m going to go to hell. I also know what it\'s like to be different and not be able to change it. It\'s who I am now. However, it is still hard for me to imagine your world. I can think that people who are intolerant of a person\'s preferences are \'silly\'. But that term is way too mild. How does one cope? Hopefully, your story will enlighten me.
Snowfall
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Nine
Ah, indignation. I know the feeling well. My children are fortunate in that their highschool peers who are of another sexual preference are accepted for the most part. Only those few with something to prove make an issue of it. I am anxious to hear more of Desimir\'s life. BTW, what is the correct pronunciation of Desimir?
Snowfall
Ah, indignation. I know the feeling well. My children are fortunate in that their highschool peers who are of another sexual preference are accepted for the most part. Only those few with something to prove make an issue of it. I am anxious to hear more of Desimir\'s life. BTW, what is the correct pronunciation of Desimir?
Snowfall
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10
Oh no! I knew it! I just knew there would be a stalker. The question is, which ex is it? Damn.
The whole match making business was amusing and I could see it happening. You really know how to put their emotions into the telling of their lives. Very nice.
Snowfall
Oh no! I knew it! I just knew there would be a stalker. The question is, which ex is it? Damn.
The whole match making business was amusing and I could see it happening. You really know how to put their emotions into the telling of their lives. Very nice.
Snowfall
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11
OMG! You have built this up over such a long time that my stomach was all tingly by the time Justin so passionately initiated that first kiss. And, Desimir was behaving himself so well. My insides just jumped and cheered when Justin grabbed Desimir and planted a big one on him. Oh, and how sweet it was. Yes! So glad he went home with Desimir. I love that little quip, \"You talk to much\". Nice way to end the chapter
Damn stalker, just waiting to screw things up.
Snowfall
OMG! You have built this up over such a long time that my stomach was all tingly by the time Justin so passionately initiated that first kiss. And, Desimir was behaving himself so well. My insides just jumped and cheered when Justin grabbed Desimir and planted a big one on him. Oh, and how sweet it was. Yes! So glad he went home with Desimir. I love that little quip, \"You talk to much\". Nice way to end the chapter
Damn stalker, just waiting to screw things up.
Snowfall